tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36504670.post4846694695000016656..comments2023-09-18T07:56:46.841-07:00Comments on John Sokol's Blog: The Apple, part 1. As Sci-Fi Story by John L. SokolJohn Sokolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17719400170309249969noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36504670.post-43610567400692403422009-11-22T19:42:17.680-08:002009-11-22T19:42:17.680-08:00Good start John. You might want to read it throug...Good start John. You might want to read it through for spelling and grammar, things that Checkers don't catch. For example, you and "and" when you mean "am".<br /><br />Anyway, these are minor and don't get in the way of your telling the story. Keep it up!<br />==HarrisonHMR_in_SVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12142854439980784172noreply@blogger.com